tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8477852467491066481.comments2011-06-16T07:54:43.758+08:00Plain WhiteYin Sianhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02318466281087728206noreply@blogger.comBlogger46125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8477852467491066481.post-4896912871719200492011-06-16T07:54:43.758+08:002011-06-16T07:54:43.758+08:00color is simple, good choice of colors, maybe u ca...color is simple, good choice of colors, maybe u can design the paragraphs? choice of types are wide, try to use something nicer for menu,dont use similar font. make it look a little more milky because right now without any other images i cant see it is a "susu lembu" page~overall it is simple an neat.well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8477852467491066481.post-51843402139146086412011-06-16T00:54:07.685+08:002011-06-16T00:54:07.685+08:00I checked out the original Goodday website and def...I checked out the original Goodday website and definitely feel that both have different winning gears in terms of web design.<br /><br />At first glance, I would vote in favor of the original. But at closer look, I would be on the fence.<br /><br />The dimension of the original is more appealing as yours appear very flat and 2d; suggesting a paper work or planning company or something. However your color and font choices definitely beat the original hands down; the original is very outdated and old-fashion while yours is modern. However, though I said that your color choices are better, I feel that you need to lessen your white spaces.<br /><br />One more suggestion would be to add depth to your design. I believe some shadow here and there might bring drastic enhancement to your page.<br /><br />Oh by the way, where's your cow? Maybe you want to add a cow so that it's noticeable that it's a cow product? =)<br /><br />Just my personal opinions =) All the best!!!Kok Yen, Staci Tanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08795103530849795482noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8477852467491066481.post-48677116880138314582011-06-13T15:27:14.718+08:002011-06-13T15:27:14.718+08:00@Lex Ng
I like the simple coloring, but I do fee...@Lex Ng <br /><br />I like the simple coloring, but I do feel there needs to be less white space. but simple coloring seems more elegant and professional.Masarunoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8477852467491066481.post-67001825874733714702011-06-13T10:58:35.163+08:002011-06-13T10:58:35.163+08:00Heylo :-)
Basic struture is already there, howeve...Heylo :-)<br /><br />Basic struture is already there, however I felt this is just still a first degree design. Some tweaking in the design and voila! Few tips to cheat the audience eyes so it look good:<br /><br />1. Okay, probably need a certain highlights on the menu to let audience know which page they are at.<br />2. Why not add some treatments to the menu fonts? It would probably look more interesting with some simple simple simple icons :-)<br />3. Add some gradient to the colours :-) bring some shine and gloss to it! <br />4. Tone down what's not needed to focus. Probably the bottom bar, tone down a little to reduce the conflict of attention. <br />5. Be confident with your design!Zhiqinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09025592014420720859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8477852467491066481.post-24221524482898574962011-06-13T10:13:33.677+08:002011-06-13T10:13:33.677+08:00Banner haven't put in. Can't compare the p...Banner haven't put in. Can't compare the picture size to the navigation button size.<br /><br />The feedback page, I feel the name, email and message font size too overwhelming.<br /><br />The product page, why is there a click down button then got another continue button. Confusing. Do I click down to see more or continue to see more?<br /><br />Certificate page need some text.<br /><br />Use the side space more to maximize content. Reduce the need of scrolling down the browser which is good.<br /><br />Bottom bar maybe can put more company information rather than just Susu Lembu Asli Marketing Sdn. Bhd. This part the font also too big. Is like competing with the navigation button.<br /><br />Overall design is good.Color choice is ok,but could use a bit more of color. Maybe after inserting banner would look more lively.Lex Nghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05374343512082549387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8477852467491066481.post-26833841523274302752011-06-13T10:07:01.802+08:002011-06-13T10:07:01.802+08:00nice and simple design...
attractive buttons with...nice and simple design... <br />attractive buttons with big fonts...<br />but, for the second screenshot, the right hand side font(name, email, message) can be smaller...<br />im lost in forth screenshot... and i notice that you didnt highlight which page is the user at...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8477852467491066481.post-71426608203983596082011-06-13T10:05:27.481+08:002011-06-13T10:05:27.481+08:00Design is good, but there is not a lot of informat...Design is good, but there is not a lot of information. I am not sure if that is important hahaMasarunoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8477852467491066481.post-88084539648369612742011-05-31T22:09:33.432+08:002011-05-31T22:09:33.432+08:00Dear Yin Sian,
I think the mood board now has too...Dear Yin Sian,<br /><br />I think the mood board now has too many texts but is lacking of design elements and pictures.Try to add in more?<br /><br />Also, it is too boxy and this moment, try to be more free a little.<br /><br />Please refer to the links as below:<br />http://www.polyvore.com/<br /><br />http://lizkorutz.wordpress.com/page/2/<br /><br />http://freelancemingle.com/blog/productivity/creating-an-effective-mood-board/<br /><br />Cheers!Dinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00833215117354295924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8477852467491066481.post-42731181017100959302011-05-18T12:31:41.338+08:002011-05-18T12:31:41.338+08:00Hi, your site map is confusing when it comes to th...Hi, your site map is confusing when it comes to the certificate section. I think the feedback should not be under the certificate section. You can have a contact section to hold the feedback.wenyeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04078697230917814178noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8477852467491066481.post-80991353337672938222011-01-11T16:22:30.678+08:002011-01-11T16:22:30.678+08:00Hi Yin Sian,
Good effort, you can also find your l...Hi Yin Sian,<br />Good effort, you can also find your library of javascripts and css application to enhance your website.wenyeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04078697230917814178noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8477852467491066481.post-38937177360377754412010-07-10T18:37:30.585+08:002010-07-10T18:37:30.585+08:001. 4
2. 3
3. maybe yes! but need spend time to loo...1. 4<br />2. 3<br />3. maybe yes! but need spend time to look at it..<br />4. yes. because i love the colour... hee =)<br />5. simple intrustion. and no have enough place to play..SuitLihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00865911041331908065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8477852467491066481.post-83444409450291907892010-07-08T23:30:49.546+08:002010-07-08T23:30:49.546+08:001. 5
2. 4
3. Yes, may be. But will be defended in ...1. 5<br />2. 4<br />3. Yes, may be. But will be defended in no time. LOL.<br />4. May be. But I'm not interested in chess.<br />5. The flow was random. It didnt guide me where to start reading. It would be prefect to redesign the positions. And tis information, are they for websites/notice boards/leaflets? And I prefer more colours too >.<<br /><br />BTW, ur design improved a LOT from ur 1st designs way back. Well done and congrats. I may not know much bout designing, but I'm impressed with ur designs now. Cant wait for more surprises.kokweinoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8477852467491066481.post-40006876499082745582010-07-08T23:15:27.643+08:002010-07-08T23:15:27.643+08:004
Q2 Understandability
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Q3 Do you think you ar...4<br /><br />Q2 Understandability<br />3<br /><br /><br />Q3 Do you think you are now able to play chess with the help of this graphical information? Please state your reason(s).<br />I think I can. But then, I will have to spend time and effort on it. For such impatient people like me, I doubt I will try to learn it when I see this on the first sight. It's not convincing enough for the starter. <br /><br /><br />Are you interested to find more about chess when you first look at it? Please state your reason(s)<br />At first look, I am attracted by the graphic. The colours chosen look pretty interesting and classic. <br /><br />What suggestion do you have that will help the graphical informations to meet your need(s)?<br />I think the whole thing is too compacted. Should play with more space.. Now that things are so close to each other, like no air to breathe. So, perhaps, have to find solution in making the spaces look more comfortable. <br /><br />:)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17096878209437551679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8477852467491066481.post-41089667934615338962010-07-08T23:15:22.473+08:002010-07-08T23:15:22.473+08:00Q1 Readability
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Q2 Understandability
_...Q1 Readability<br />_____4_____<br /><br />Q2 Understandability<br />______4______<br /><br /><br />Q3 Do you think you are now able to play chess with the help of this graphical information? Please state your reason(s).<br />Yes. Chess is so easy to learn.<br /><br /><br />Are you interested to find more about chess when you first look at it? Please state your reason(s)<br />Yes. Because I need an opponent to play with so that I can learn more.<br /><br /><br />What suggestion do you have that will help the graphical informations to meet your need(s)?<br />^_^Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8477852467491066481.post-80834163418657039242010-07-08T22:10:16.469+08:002010-07-08T22:10:16.469+08:00Q1
-> 4
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-> 3
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-> I get the parts,...Q1 <br />-> 4<br /><br />Q2<br />-> 3<br /><br />Q3<br />-> I get the parts, as in basics of bits and pieces of what is expected to be done and all, but I don't think that a fresh beginner would be able to process all these information and to put it into practical practice. Probably make a flow chart? To link all these pieces and hence, produces a better understanding level for the beginners.<br /><br />Q4<br />-> Caught my interest alright~ X3 Interesting graphics and choices of words. Also, the effect of the whole graphic is awesome~ <br /><br />Q5<br />-> Try condensing the descriptions and explanations further - it's currently too wordy. Overall, me likey~ *thumbs up*.:kittension:.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11655847185938359746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8477852467491066481.post-34553541903398387852010-07-08T21:49:13.189+08:002010-07-08T21:49:13.189+08:00Q1 Readability [ 4.5 ]
Q2 Understandability [4]
Q3...Q1 Readability [ 4.5 ]<br />Q2 Understandability [4]<br />Q3 Do you think you are now able to play chess with the help of this graphical information? Please state your reason(s).<br />- Yes, it has all the information we need to start moving the chess pieces,and you even included the basic 4 steps checkmate. I think its all pretty well covered.<br /><br /><br />Are you interested to find more about chess when you first look at it? Please state your reason(s)<br />Yes, after looking into your basic info about chess, I would probably search online for more details about chess strategies.<br /><br /><br />What suggestion do you have that will help the graphical informations to meet your need(s)?<br />I would probably be introducing the layout into few sections using boxes. Cause there's too many info, and when I first look at it, i just dunno where to start. Probably distributing it into boxes of different categories. So I can look at things section by sections.Zhiqinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09025592014420720859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8477852467491066481.post-22063939027863928742010-07-08T21:18:34.013+08:002010-07-08T21:18:34.013+08:00Q1: 4
Q2: 3
Q3: 3, too many words. don't know ...Q1: 4<br />Q2: 3<br />Q3: 3, too many words. don't know which to focus on<br />Q4: 3, because the graphic and arrow of movement<br />Q5: simpler instructionsezerinanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8477852467491066481.post-85135926539511710352010-07-08T20:34:00.453+08:002010-07-08T20:34:00.453+08:00Q1
5
Q2
3
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3 I can't figure out the main a...Q1<br />5<br /><br />Q2<br />3<br /><br />Q3<br />3 I can't figure out the main aim of the game. I see the clock with the time, but what does it actually mean?<br /><br />Q4<br />It definitely looks attractive. But after looking at it for a while, I realised I don't know where to start reading from. It makes me feel a little inferior to learn chess. Maybe numbered steps would help.<br /><br />Q5<br />Add more colours. Organise it with steps.Kikinoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8477852467491066481.post-18101944638248350442010-07-07T22:08:41.970+08:002010-07-07T22:08:41.970+08:00Q1 4
Q2 3
Q3 not really cause the information pr...Q1 4<br /><br />Q2 3<br /><br />Q3 not really cause the information provided are not specific and quite complicated to read as in where to read from<br /><br />Q4 yes, cause it seems interesting by just looking at it<br /><br />Q5 short and simple information should be provided in order to understand well.<br />different types of colors should be added in order to make it even more attractiveAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8477852467491066481.post-90232286233152243102010-07-07T21:28:41.809+08:002010-07-07T21:28:41.809+08:00Q1 3
Q2 3
Q3 3, I dont understand the info given.
...Q1 3<br />Q2 3<br />Q3 3, I dont understand the info given.<br />Q4 3, it looks complicated<br />Q5Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8477852467491066481.post-43453218879133065622010-07-07T21:24:23.561+08:002010-07-07T21:24:23.561+08:00Question 1
3
Question 2
2
Question 3
Yes, but ca...Question 1<br />3<br /><br />Question 2<br />2<br /><br />Question 3<br />Yes, but can only play against beginner. Because the diagram that show how the chess pieces are move are not shown clearly. <br /><br />Question 4<br />Nope, it looks too complicated because everything looks pack together<br /><br />Question 5<br />No comment cause i sucks at it ><Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8477852467491066481.post-19835301394206344742010-07-07T20:45:48.187+08:002010-07-07T20:45:48.187+08:001. 4
2. 4
3. 3 I dont really understand some of th...1. 4<br />2. 4<br />3. 3 I dont really understand some of the info.<br />4. 5 Yes I do.<br />5. brighter colors.Sue Maenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8477852467491066481.post-5062608405656157682010-07-07T20:35:39.955+08:002010-07-07T20:35:39.955+08:00Excellent job!Well done ya! Keep it up.Excellent job!Well done ya! Keep it up.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8477852467491066481.post-65038178124208762202010-07-07T18:48:28.098+08:002010-07-07T18:48:28.098+08:00Q1 Readability
4
Q2 Understandability
2
Q3 Do yo...Q1 Readability<br />4<br /><br />Q2 Understandability<br />2<br /><br />Q3 Do you think you are now able to play chess with the help of this graphical information? Please state your reason(s).<br /><br />The information are too random, I don't know where to start reading. When I saw the big "4" on the upper right side, I thought it is the number where we should start reading and I started searching for "1" but later I found out that it was not like that.<br /><br />For the movement of the chess piece, I think you need to clarify more, example:<br /><br />king move diagonally and straight, but you didn't state "moves by 1 step only"<br /><br />same to queen, you said move freely. What is meant by freely? So you have to edit the words I think.<br /><br />The symbols and points, I don't understand what it is for, is it used for tournament/some competition? or just for recording movement of a game? you didn't state that.<br /><br />I think the words could be simplified and you need to guide the audience where to start reading, and which information is more important (eg, put in bold, or increase the size), which are the detailed info (eg, smaller words).<br /><br /><br />Are you interested to find more about chess when you first look at it? Please state your reason(s)<br /><br />Ya sure. The colours are interesting and the graphic are nice. <br /><br /><br />What suggestion do you have that will help the graphical informations to meet your need(s)?<br />Mentioned above, layout.Soulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14060376958750885996noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8477852467491066481.post-48006072213810313162010-07-07T17:08:13.647+08:002010-07-07T17:08:13.647+08:001) 4
2) 3
3) 3.5 maybe some side tips like.. the B...1) 4<br />2) 3<br />3) 3.5 maybe some side tips like.. the Bishop and the queen you could summarize it a little. Might be easier to understand in least words.<br /><br />4) 4 yes, (agree with anonymous above me) :)<br />5) Can use darker brown on the opposite space to differentiate the different teams, so you can save the space from the two check box below.Wei Jiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10216239882035508296noreply@blogger.com