nice and simple design... attractive buttons with big fonts... but, for the second screenshot, the right hand side font(name, email, message) can be smaller... im lost in forth screenshot... and i notice that you didnt highlight which page is the user at...
Banner haven't put in. Can't compare the picture size to the navigation button size.
The feedback page, I feel the name, email and message font size too overwhelming.
The product page, why is there a click down button then got another continue button. Confusing. Do I click down to see more or continue to see more?
Certificate page need some text.
Use the side space more to maximize content. Reduce the need of scrolling down the browser which is good.
Bottom bar maybe can put more company information rather than just Susu Lembu Asli Marketing Sdn. Bhd. This part the font also too big. Is like competing with the navigation button.
Overall design is good.Color choice is ok,but could use a bit more of color. Maybe after inserting banner would look more lively.
Basic struture is already there, however I felt this is just still a first degree design. Some tweaking in the design and voila! Few tips to cheat the audience eyes so it look good:
1. Okay, probably need a certain highlights on the menu to let audience know which page they are at. 2. Why not add some treatments to the menu fonts? It would probably look more interesting with some simple simple simple icons :-) 3. Add some gradient to the colours :-) bring some shine and gloss to it! 4. Tone down what's not needed to focus. Probably the bottom bar, tone down a little to reduce the conflict of attention. 5. Be confident with your design!
I checked out the original Goodday website and definitely feel that both have different winning gears in terms of web design.
At first glance, I would vote in favor of the original. But at closer look, I would be on the fence.
The dimension of the original is more appealing as yours appear very flat and 2d; suggesting a paper work or planning company or something. However your color and font choices definitely beat the original hands down; the original is very outdated and old-fashion while yours is modern. However, though I said that your color choices are better, I feel that you need to lessen your white spaces.
One more suggestion would be to add depth to your design. I believe some shadow here and there might bring drastic enhancement to your page.
Oh by the way, where's your cow? Maybe you want to add a cow so that it's noticeable that it's a cow product? =)
color is simple, good choice of colors, maybe u can design the paragraphs? choice of types are wide, try to use something nicer for menu,dont use similar font. make it look a little more milky because right now without any other images i cant see it is a "susu lembu" page~overall it is simple an neat.well done!
Design is good, but there is not a lot of information. I am not sure if that is important haha
ReplyDeletenice and simple design...
ReplyDeleteattractive buttons with big fonts...
but, for the second screenshot, the right hand side font(name, email, message) can be smaller...
im lost in forth screenshot... and i notice that you didnt highlight which page is the user at...
Banner haven't put in. Can't compare the picture size to the navigation button size.
ReplyDeleteThe feedback page, I feel the name, email and message font size too overwhelming.
The product page, why is there a click down button then got another continue button. Confusing. Do I click down to see more or continue to see more?
Certificate page need some text.
Use the side space more to maximize content. Reduce the need of scrolling down the browser which is good.
Bottom bar maybe can put more company information rather than just Susu Lembu Asli Marketing Sdn. Bhd. This part the font also too big. Is like competing with the navigation button.
Overall design is good.Color choice is ok,but could use a bit more of color. Maybe after inserting banner would look more lively.
Heylo :-)
ReplyDeleteBasic struture is already there, however I felt this is just still a first degree design. Some tweaking in the design and voila! Few tips to cheat the audience eyes so it look good:
1. Okay, probably need a certain highlights on the menu to let audience know which page they are at.
2. Why not add some treatments to the menu fonts? It would probably look more interesting with some simple simple simple icons :-)
3. Add some gradient to the colours :-) bring some shine and gloss to it!
4. Tone down what's not needed to focus. Probably the bottom bar, tone down a little to reduce the conflict of attention.
5. Be confident with your design!
@Lex Ng
ReplyDeleteI like the simple coloring, but I do feel there needs to be less white space. but simple coloring seems more elegant and professional.
I checked out the original Goodday website and definitely feel that both have different winning gears in terms of web design.
ReplyDeleteAt first glance, I would vote in favor of the original. But at closer look, I would be on the fence.
The dimension of the original is more appealing as yours appear very flat and 2d; suggesting a paper work or planning company or something. However your color and font choices definitely beat the original hands down; the original is very outdated and old-fashion while yours is modern. However, though I said that your color choices are better, I feel that you need to lessen your white spaces.
One more suggestion would be to add depth to your design. I believe some shadow here and there might bring drastic enhancement to your page.
Oh by the way, where's your cow? Maybe you want to add a cow so that it's noticeable that it's a cow product? =)
Just my personal opinions =) All the best!!!
color is simple, good choice of colors, maybe u can design the paragraphs? choice of types are wide, try to use something nicer for menu,dont use similar font. make it look a little more milky because right now without any other images i cant see it is a "susu lembu" page~overall it is simple an neat.well done!
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